高考英语满分作文:宾馆宣传(名师点评)

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高考英语满分作文:宾馆宣传(名师点评)

  【全国卷II】

  【试题回放】

  一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:

  1.地点:距白山入口处500米;

  2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;双人间(共15间),150元/天;热水淋浴;

  3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);

  4.游泳池:全天免费开放;

  5.欢迎预定。

  注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

  Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

  500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

  Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

  【名师点评】

  本文开门见山,首先点明了主旨。本文的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式,使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说,文章句式精炼,是篇不错的满分作文。

  积累卡片英汉互译

  好词 1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

  好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

  very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利,并且非常的愉快。

  评析:bring great convenience,带来便利。

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